Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 5, 2019
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Honey it's Caprice you are good at writing in your own words. Did you think about putting some facts in your slide. Maybe think about the colour of fonts and backgrounds? But overall it is really good.
ReplyDeletethanks caprice :)
ReplyDelete
ReplyDeleteKia ora Honey it’s Libby. You are very good at writing in your own words, maybe next time you can think about putting more colour into your writing but other than that it is really good.