Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 2, 2019
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Hi Honey. I have really enjoyed looking at your blog. I loved the Dr Who animation. I can see how much time and effort you have put into it so far and hope that you get the opportunity to continue the story. I am looking forward to seeing if the doctor regenerates on the adventure and which aliens he/she will meet. Well done
ReplyDeletehey honey brock here that was a animation maybe you cloud add more slides
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Hi Honey, Billy here I love your Doctor who animation and I love the cybermen. Maybe next time you could make the run for the doctor harder so it is more interesting.
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ReplyDeleteand billy there will be a more interesting run soon
ReplyDeleteHi Honey, Kadyn here, I liked the way you added an asteroid that the police box hit.Did you think about adding a army of cyber man why did you add the cyber man?
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ReplyDeleteI am Tayla from Marshland School
I quite liked your animation because I found it rather interesting but I found it hard to read.
Maybe next time you could add more slides when your people are talking but overall its pretty good!
How long did it take for you to make this animation? &
Why did you choose to do an animation about doctor who?
-Tayla :)