Hello everyone! Today's post is a really fun but hard literacy task...we had to create a pick a path story on google forms. I have to say it took a lot of effort and time but In the end, I'm very proud. At first, when writing the story I was really stumped! But then I just used my imagination to come up with a really kind of strange fantasy story. I did use quite a few typical cliches that you can normally find in fantasy, so we'll see if you can spot them! If you find any errors please comment them so I can work on my mistakes. Here's the link to it if you can't access it Click here :).
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 3, 2021
What will you choose?🤨
2 comments:
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Hey Honey, I did not stand up to the wizard! I will try to remember to stand up with my powers next time!
ReplyDeleteAmazing story, I love all of the descriptive language. Fantastic, well done.
Wow Honey
ReplyDeletethis is so cool I took it and I think I did bad. No I did not survive I liked the first part. And also thanks for commenting on my blog.
By Caitlin