Thursday, January 16, 2020
Summer learning Journey One small step for man
Another summer learning task!
Have you written a poem before?
In this activity we had to write a poem about what you would be feeling on the moon.
What would you be feeling?
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Kia Ora Honey,
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem! I love your use of rhyme and rhythm. It has a great pace and I really like the graphics you have included in the background. It adds to the poem quite nicely.
When I think of space, I think of aliens and stars. If you could meet an alien, what would you show him or her first about the Earth? I think I’d show him things like the Great Wall of China or maybe take him to the zoo to see all the cool life-forms that exist on Earth.
Happy blogging!
Ngā mihi maioha,
Shannon (SLJ)