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Thursday, January 16, 2020

Summer learning journey Up in the air!



Here is another learning Journey task! 
Have you ever flown in a plane?
Were did you go?
This is a Venn diagram of the differences 
and similarities of Amelia Earhart and Jean Batten !
Please comment if there are some things I need to improve. 

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Honey, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.

    You’ve done a tremendous job! I love the way you’ve included pictures and colours to make your post stand out. It’s super well structured and looks amazing. Well done!

    Just a quick note, Amelia Earhart was actually born in Kansas in the United States of America, not Rotorua, but the rest of your facts are absolutely perfect and truly summarise her life, origins, and accomplishments super well! Perhaps you could update this information.

    If you were either of these amazing pilots, where would you fly to and what would you do there? I think I’d fly to Antarctica and see all the penguin colonies. They’re super cute and I’d love to see them waddle about. Did you know penguins mate for life and to signify this bond, the male penguin gives his partner a special rock, How cool is that?

    Keep up the great work!
    Ngā mihi maioha,
    Shannon (SLJ)

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  2. hi its Olivia I couldn't really see some of the words you wrote because the purple and pink was covering it but over all it looked pretty good to me.

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