Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, April 22, 2020
Excellent Egyptians
Ancient Egyptians Biteable
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hi Honey, wow Ancient Egyptian history is fascinating isn't it? I was lucky enough to travel there in my 20's and went into some ancient tombs and even under pyramids! I didn't really like how narrow the tunnels were into the pyramids though. I have a spelling tip: their = when something belongs to someone (not there). Great Biteable skills there too.
ReplyDeleteHey Honey, great presentation. Do you know why they buried the Pharoahs treasure with them? Its somewhere I would live to visit one day. J x
ReplyDeleteThank you both for commenting and yes I did notice that mistake there. Also I do know why they buried their treasure with them, they thought that they needed all those stuff for a good after life. Thanks for commenting in my blog, have a nice day.
ReplyDeleteHoney :)