Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
Red Miss Take
For writing term 3 day 2 we had to do a writing about a video called Red miss take, after we watched the video we had to complete a bunch or tasks about the video. Here are my tasks, I will update this post every time I do a task. Here is my first task and second task , the first task was about making instructions for the machine, and the second task was were we had to make a recipe for red riding hood, Jack from jack and the beanstalk and the big bad wolf, I had fun thinking of the ingredients and the language that I would use Enjoy!!!
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Hey hey hey It's Billy here!!!
ReplyDeleteThat video you told us about must be very cool and I love how you made the the Instructions by number.
well Billy out, Peace
Hi Honey
ReplyDeleteSounds like you are making good use of your Lockdown time with plenty of learning! Great post and very detailed! I really enjoy your writing style and the way you used such great descriptive language! Looking forward to reading more posts from you Honey. Mrs Pascoe
Honey, I LOVE your description. You have such a way with words. Well done. Janey x
ReplyDeleteHi Honey. Wow! This task has been a real labour of love for you. You have perservered even when you have found some of the tasks a challenge. I really love your potions and the ending of the story where the dolls meet the Brothers Grimm! Awesome work
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