Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, June 18, 2020
Sisters don't always like each other
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Hi Honey!!
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing and yes I have a brother and he is so annoying and we always fight but his small so I don't really care. The reason I like this because the way you made these character if you did are amazing and that it's a story about two sisters that fight. Well good bye honey I would love to see even more posts.
Kia Ora Honey!
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing story you made! You did an awesome job! I have a younger brother Billy (of course you know him). I love him put like you and Alfie, we don't always get along. I like what you used for the characters and backgrounds. What did you use?
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Kia ora Honey!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maringi from Ahipara school.
I loved you story about the two sisters.
I think it is cool that the two sisters actually love each other.
Hi Honey my name is Maikee from Ahipara school I liked the two sister they were so funny.
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