Are you in lockdown too? Kia ora. Well, the Corona virus is back! But this time worse...I am stuck at home AGAIN!!! I really don't enjoy distance learning, because I love my friends and teachers and I just don't like being stuck at home and really just flopping on the couch. So today my literacy distance learning task was to create a ghost horror story that showcases some of the genre conventions. This was really fun for me and I enjoyed being imaginative. It reminded me of the ghost stories my nanny has told me...some of them are not as scary as others...anyway, my story is called Row Boat and I really hope you enjoy reading it.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, August 19, 2021
I'm never gonna go in a lake AGAIN! 🛶
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Hi Honey!
ReplyDeleteI Love your blog post so much detail, Perfect puntuation and amazing title. I cant think of anything for you to improve on!
This remineds me of my first time kayaking on the lake I guess its going to be my last time now to. Overall a great blog post!
Kind regards
-LP
Thanks LP!
ReplyDeleteHiya Honey,
ReplyDeleteI'm Lucy from korimako hub. I think your story is amazing it has so much detail! Your story kind of left there i really wanted it go on! That's how amazing it is!! Kai pai
from Lucy
Hey Honey! Janey here!! Just Wow!!! What happened? I want to know more! So well written. Amazing work Honey. Janey x
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